Tell us about the best day of your life. We want details! Who, what, when, where, why, and how, and
also, how were you feeling when the event was happening?
Use both simple past and past progressive to narrate your day, which will show that you know how to use the forms correctly.
The best day of my life is the day I won a 2nd prize when I auditioned my school talent show. It happened two years ago when I was in grade ten. After auditioned for the first round, I went straight to the final round because I had a high vote. In my final round, when I was performing my song on stage, my friends ran on stage and gave me many flowers. The audiences gave me applauses while I was still suprising. I was feeling very happy and pround of myself.
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DeleteWHILE I was performing my song on stage...
Nice writing. Special day!
One of the best day of my life was when I went to California 4 months ago and I saw my cousin after 2 years, in the meantime we advantaged to spent our time together and enjoyed our memories and moments. We visited many beautifull places like Santa Monica, Laguna Beach, Disneyland and some food places. I really enjoy spend my free time with my family and friends.
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The best day in my life is the day I passed the interview to go to the United States. That was the second time and I already tried so hard to make my dream come true. On that day, when I was waiting for my interview, I thought that if I failed this time, I would give up and continue studying in my country. Then I encouraged myself that was a challenge, it depended on not only myself but also other factors. Fortunately, I was interview by a women, she is very friendly, so it helped me feel more comfortable and confident than before. Sometimes, when I was answering the questions, the councilor interrupted me and asked another questions. After many questions, she gave me a blue piece of paper and said "Good luck" to me. On that time, I fell so excited and happy,as I already made my dream come true.
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Deleteshe WAS very friendly
Your writing is clear to understand. Good work.
The memorable day of my life is when I received a bronze medal in tenth grade and a silver medal in eleventh grade in Geography before large students and teachers at Hoang Hoa Tham high school in Vietnam. This competition is held once a year in order to find some best students of a certain subject of the South Vietnam. I still remember that I was having breakfast with my family, my teacher phoned me, she informed me that I was on the list of competitors who won the competition. I and my parents were so happy. When the closing cerenomy came, I and another students who won the competition like me were announced go to the podium in order that we could received medals, when I faced the audiences, I was so happy, because I knew my efforts were repayable. And I promised on my mind that I will study harder and better to make me to be appreciated and my parents proud of myself.
ReplyDeleteMy parents and I... other students who won the competition and I were told to go to the podium to receive medals..
DeleteI knew my efforts were REPAID.
Nice writing; good past tense.
One of the best day of my life was when I picked up a little puppy on the side of the street and made it into a family. Many years ago,i was walking outside until i saw a small fur ball was moving around in a box on the side walk.So,i walked close to it and then i saw a little puppy was shaking and barking softly in there.The puppy was looking at me like tried to tell me don't leave it.By the end, i brought it home after i took it to get a check at the vet.
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The best day of my life was when I came to America.i never dreamed of this country just by luck .I passed the interview and I stayed like two month to decide wich state I will go and I meet my friend and we decide to go for Texas in this time im so excited .but I saw my family sad because I leave them.it was big day for me to change my life from staying in home doing nothing to work by myself study by myself. But look now I'm one year and half I feel comfortable and thanks to my god.
ReplyDeletebut I saw that my family WAS sad because I LEFT them
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the best day in my life is 02/06/2014 when i was in home preparing for my interview suddenly my mom reminded me to check the web site of the lottery . In that moment i was worried about my interview but i couldnt say no to my mom . so when i checked it that was i big surprise for me and all my family specialy my mom because she wanted me to have an opportunity to live in america and to success in my live
ReplyDeletewhen I was AT home...
Deleteto live in America and to SUCCEED in my LIFE.
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I was a sunny day, and I was playing with my friends outside like always when I heard my father voice calling me. I was surprised because he do not used to be at home at this moment in the day. I ran toward our house.As soon as i got home I saw him standing next to a new bycicle...
ReplyDeletebecause he didn't used to come home at this time.
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My best day was when my friends surprised me with a Little birthday party. I remember I turned eighteen years old that day and I wasn't feeling good. I got a flu and I stayed home. My friends had a plan to suprise me with a birthday cake and some foods to eat. While staying home, I heard people singing and calling my name to go ouside. I went there and I saw my friends with a cake. That was really good for me and touchable. The other best day for me, was when I was coming to the United States. I was excited to exicited to see my sister because it has been a while since we see each other.
ReplyDeleteThe second best day for me was when I CAME to the US.
DeleteI was excited to see my sister because it HAD BEEN a while since we HAD SEEN each other (we will study past perfect next week).
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I have many happy days in my life, but the best one is the following that I will describe to you . When I was a kid, I always wanted to have a dog. But while I was talking about it, my mother said, 'You are too young, my lady.' Finally, when I was twelve years old, I came home after school as usual. I just opened the door, my mother was laughing and said to me, 'Look! Who is he?' Before I understood what happened, a lovely dog had run to me. The dog was so exciting that couldn't stop wagging his tail. I picked up my little dog, laughing and crying. That was my best day in my life.
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DeleteI got several best day in my life, but the one that I always remember is when I graduated from university.This day all my family and friends were down there at the ceremony of graduation and I was very happy to see them. In their face I saw they were proud of me because they always wish for me to be successful in school.I really really enjoy having them with at the ceremony
ReplyDeleteI really ENJOYED having them with me.
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I have many best days in my life. First, best day in my life when I got my car cause I was wishing if I have it because not like a normal car, it’s a gift and it means a lot to me. Second, when I graduated from high school because all of my friends were close to each other all day. However, the third day was when I decided to came to the U.S. it feels me to be more responsibility and taking care of a lot of things and planning to my future.
ReplyDeleteYou can only have one BEST day. You can have a SECOND BEST day or a NEXT BEST day but you can only have one BEST day!
DeleteThe best day in my life WAS when I got my car BECAUSE...
The second best day WAS when I graduated...
The third day... when I decided to COME to the US.
I FELT more responsibility...
The best day in my life was when my sister born. I remember that my mom was talking about her during 9 months. The day was her born I slept in grandmother's room because in the middle of the night my mom went to the hospital. When I woke up my grandma took me to the hospital and I felt excited and happy. All the way to the hospital I was thinking about my sister and my mom, so when I saw my sister I felt jelous but now I think that her was my best gift from my parents and because that my best day was when she born on 03 February some years ago
ReplyDeletewhen my sister WAS BORN.
DeleteThe day SHE WAS born
now I think that SHE was the best gift...
when she WAS BORN
Nice story. How old is your sister?
The best day of my life was when i went to santiago wanderes stadium for watched a soccer game , with my grand father. I had 5 years old and was my first time at a professional stadium. That day was incredible because finally i can watch for first time in live, real professional player. I remember that stadium was full, maybe fifty five thousand people and all singing the same song for motivation to the proffesional player. From this moment i love soccer and my best friend is a soccer ball and I can not be separated from him. In conclusion soccer is one passion and the best sport of the world because everybody can practice this wonderful and attractive sport and all this felling I feel for this sport is thanks to my grandfather rest in peace grandpa!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI WAS five years old and IT WAS my first...
Delete...finally I COULD watch
From this moment, I LOVED soccer and my best friend WAS a soccer ball
Nice story